You

Wednesday, September 19, 2012

You!



Entrenched with golden sunshine,
Your beauty bathed in summer warmth;
Armed with saccharinity, you redefine pristine,
Today I saw Life by my side,
In the deserted street of my heart;
Everlasting! How you ignite?

Further down the age,
There is an outrage;
Of owning a piece of that dream,
Can we team?
To win a life against those pathos!
There is calmness after all chaos.
There is a road beyond the wilderness;
There is hope in todays’ bitterness.

You enchanted everyone in the crowd,
You grew taller and I loud!
The meadows are not watered for eons;
You created a father and many sons,
You signed separations with wild thorns,
Your journey overturned many storms,

Days are getting longer,
Younger and stronger!
I have buried all the pains;
Yonder by the valley of rains,
Past can blot your present with stain,
Your yardstick is what you gain!
I am the corpse today – do not uncover,
Behold! You were never my lover;
My heartbeats dried with time,
While you bathed in golden sunshine.

12 comments:

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brilliant

Sri Valli said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Awesome poetry!
I loved this line specially..."Past can blot your present with stain"....So true!!

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@alka narulaThank you Alka

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@Sri Valli Thank you Valli. Happy that you liked my work :)

Dibya said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

You enchanted everyone in the crowd,
You grew taller and I loud!
The meadows are not watered for eons;
You created a father and many sons,
You signed separations with wild thorns,
Your journey overturned many storms,


Awesome. :)

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@Dibya Thank you Dibya :)

indu chhibber said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Loved your poem,esp-

There is a road beyond the wilderness;
There is hope in todays’ bitterness.

Panchali said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Loved your expressionss...beautiful:)
My first time here, and I am going to come back again. :))

Shamsud said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@indu chhibber Thank you Indu for your kind words.

Shamsud said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Panchali Thank you Panchali...You have read my post in thePast and thank you for visiting again...:)

Upasana said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Beautiful expression! Poignant!

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RD Stokes said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Very nice. I put a link to this poem at
“edge of frog” – http://edgeoffrog.wordpress.com/
Thank you!

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